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Post by Enderminion on Sept 7, 2017 12:09:24 GMT
oh lol I didnt even realise she had a name. I also haven't played in a while. but anyway, isnt that based off of whoever is playing? It is mentioned that, yeah what the other guy said
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Sept 8, 2017 2:05:30 GMT
oh lol I didnt even realise she had a name. I also haven't played in a while. but anyway, isnt that based off of whoever is playing? It is mentioned that, yeah what the other guy saidWHAT IF SHE WANTS TO BE A BOY (Autistic screeching in the background) I'M OFFENDED IN HER SAKE Jk I didnt even read the first mission description though lol
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Nov 29, 2017 9:00:52 GMT
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Post by The Astronomer on Nov 29, 2017 10:02:24 GMT
I can see the basic problem: you try to cram too much information into a short span. That being info from CDE metas makes the thing even worse...
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Nov 29, 2017 23:55:37 GMT
I can see the basic problem: you try to cram too much information into a short span. That being info from CDE metas makes the thing even worse... hhm Ill should expand it with less detail?
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Post by The Astronomer on Nov 30, 2017 1:20:20 GMT
I can see the basic problem: you try to cram too much information into a short span. That being info from CDE metas makes the thing even worse... hhm Ill should expand it with less detail? Reduce density of the n amount of info packed in a few pages by lengthening the story narration and conversations. Not that I am a pro writer, but this is me trying
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Nov 30, 2017 1:50:18 GMT
hhm Ill should expand it with less detail? Reduce density of the n amount of info packed in a few pages by lengthening the story narration and conversations. Not that I am a pro writer, but this is me trying did you get the Easter egg about the main character's name?
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Post by Enderminion on Nov 30, 2017 2:35:43 GMT
Don't have a big expo dump at the front, thats terrible wrighting
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Nov 30, 2017 7:10:36 GMT
Don't have a big expo dump at the front, thats terrible wrighting expo?
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Nov 30, 2017 7:11:11 GMT
Don't have a big expo dump at the front, thats terrible wrighting expo? also... come on really "wrighting" during a talk about other people's mistakes lol
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Nov 30, 2017 7:11:41 GMT
Don't have a big expo dump at the front, thats terrible wrighting and Its not even 4 chapters in. I can totally change it
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Post by Enderminion on Nov 30, 2017 12:29:07 GMT
Don't have a big expo dump at the front, thats terrible wrighting expo? exposition, explaining the setting or technology with a big info dump to the reader
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Dec 1, 2017 0:36:34 GMT
There's already a book called Children of a Dead Earth that has nothing to do with the game. I've been thinking about getting into sci-fi writing and turning my almost non-stop daydreaming and mental videos of space warfare into words but I've never been good at writing flowing sentences. you would not belive how much I empathise with that lol
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Post by 𝕭𝖔𝖔𝖒𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖈𝖑𝖊 on Dec 1, 2017 5:54:57 GMT
exposition, explaining the setting or technology with a big info dump to the reader what should Mr Zankowski's first name be? (he's the main character and I want to make it fitting.)
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Post by The Astronomer on Dec 1, 2017 5:57:14 GMT
exposition, explaining the setting or technology with a big info dump to the reader what should Mr Zankowski's first name be? (he's the main character and I want to make it fitting.) Try Alexey Zankowsky?
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